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A dragons fantasy. . .

The Dragon...
Slowly wrapped his claws around the woman
But she did not move
Or even open her eyes...
She just stood still like a statue...
and
Silently quivering...of dying a fiery death
She used her body langauge to say ..
Ok take me...I'll submit to your pleasures...
But...its not for love...

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 25

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    Ooh, you went from the POV of the dragon. Different take on the picture, but it works. Nicely done with this. Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm

  • Angels Whispers gold member
    July 22

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    wonderful take

    Hi Sweet heart,

    you told me that your poem in this contest ,wasn't a good write, well I have read it and I think it's fine.It is a wonderful take on the picture prompt.Never put your talent down,you are a fine poet,and your writes are always a pleasure to read, because your words come from deep within your heart,and the reader can see and feel this when they read your work.

    Blessings to you sweet soul,much love and happiness too,

    Your AP angel Innocent

    ~Angel of Whispers~


  • maralisa gold member
    July 22

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    Silently quivering...of dying a fiery death
    She used her body langauge to say ..
    Ok take me...I'll submit to your pleasures...
    But...its not for love a very deep powerful poem full of strong emotions good luck in the contest


  • Griswold
    July 21

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    Sounds like dragonrape to me, I thought that was outlawed!!! Nicely done I like your take. Best of luck...Scott