artwork by Eun Hee Choi
Goddess of the moon, your beauty shines so bright,
your loveliness enchanting those that are within your sight.
The soft glow of your sweet compassion blesses us each night
and gives to all who worship you a wonderful delight.
Stars are your companions and shall always share your light,
even through the darkest hours up until midnight.
Moonbeams falling to the earth by your great power and might,
while your magic grants all people love that will ignite.
Looking towards the heavens as we partake in your rite,
you shower us with moon shine in your pristine veil of white.
It's through you that our deep emotions begin to take flight
for it's your love that lifts the spirit to the highest height.
Author notes
artwork from: http://www.kjun.org/
Form: Monorhyme
A Monorhyme is a poem in which all the lines have the same end rhyme.
From: http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/monorhyme.html
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Well, first, author of this beautiful picture is Hyung Jun Kim.
Very interesting is this form - Monorhyme. Your ability to write it is perfect, usage of words the same. It perfectly fits to paintings. Great done.
~Sonja~
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Much Appreciated
Hi Sonja.
Thank you for your comments, applause and honorable mention.
I appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed my poem. Take care.
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I don't know the name of the artist, either, but I posted 2 other pictures by the same artist that I think you'll enjoy; help yourself to them. The poem is lovely, Poet. You've done the form justice. Good luck in Sonja's contest. Wanda
www.allpoetry.com/poem/2828592
P.S.
This contest has several more paintings by the same person, too.
www.allpoetry.com/contest/2344392
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Much Appreciated
Hi Wanda. I appreciate your kind words and applause. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks so much for your comments and the links to the other paintings. Take care.
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Beautiful poem. It fits the picture perfectly. I had a little problem with the flow however.
Very well done none the less
Raker
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Thank you for your comments and applause.
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I really loved your use of rhyme in this poem! I love the idea of the 'moon' goddess, I'm obsessed with the moon myself. A brilliant write. Best of luck in the competition!
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Hi RoseDaughter. I appreciate your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Thanks so much for commenting. Take care.
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Beautiful poem to accompany this beautiful picture.
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Hi toomysterious. I appreciate your comments. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. Thank you very much. Take care.
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