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Less Then Me

I only asked for very little
A hug
A kiss
A held hand

(Say your goodbyes)

A shed tear
Emtpy arms
Hollow heartbeats that feel so worthless

Don't stay out too long
You'll find nothing
That night I did
you left me for something
Else.

And now I'm tired of thinking
What I did wrong
(You never did me any harm,
Yeah right)

Start a new beginning
Forget the hurt
I HAVE ANOTHER CHANCE

Don't stay out too long
You'll find nothing
That night I did
you left me for something
Else.

Author notes

Inspired by Oh, Hush!'s "Less Then Three"

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  • etoile
    August 18, 2008
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    this is sad
    i like it tho.
    goodluck in the contest


  • whiterabbit.
    July 23, 2008

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    I really like this. It's so sad but I can relate to the feelings in this. I love the way it's written and all the emotion that you've put into it. Great job and thanks for entering.