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Red Eye Reduction!

Missing image
Dedicated to the bewitched!

Reduced to silence another lamb-like lady,
Inside a girl to outsiders aged any.
Her blood red sparkling eyes,
Bewitching the beholders passing gaze.
She is restrained with blue silk covered lips,
Robes so long with brow jewels like grips.
Our eyes the windows of our soul unspoken,
An oppressive regimen means her life was stolen,
The silent expression of verbs only her eyes convey,
Living behind her veil each day,
Her lips so desperate to speak her mind,
But her religion just isn't so kind,
The beauty of her soft sallow skin,
And her perfectly defined features herein,
Her third eye wide open so spiritually aware,
Why can't her style of life be as fair?
This lady behind the sapphire veil,
With eyes magnetic red and skin so pale,
Her knowingness yet silent reverence is bold to see,
All expressions contained in her alluring eyes that be,
But nothing can transcend her beauty as seen,
For this lady of mystique is our silent queen!

Copyright
Kazytc
July 2008

Author notes

For the Allpoetry.com contest:
Contest Points are Going up by Illusions of Faith
July 2008


Picture Prompt Option : Picture depicts a beautiful lady
with a jewlled forehead pale skin deep red garnet coloured
eyes, and her mouth covered by a silky sapphire blue cloth.


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  • Hello...No.One.Home silver member
    August 6, 2008

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    WOW, this is so capivating and you have made the prompt come alive.

    But I was only asking for 20-40 words


    • Kazytc silver member
      August 6, 2008
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      Whoops so sorry!

      Hi there,
      Thanks millions for your lovely kind review of my poem. You are so kind and inspiring.
      I am so sorry that I exceded the word limit, I get carried away sometimes and write on!
      Thanks for being so nice about it though!
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc XX