its a moment passed sunrise
juxtaposed to after midnight
a time when my smile rode as long as the horizon.
enveloped in bed sheets, hot with heat
waiting on all the good boys
to come and breathe me in
-its the hardest part
of giving up on uncertainty.
'cause you place my heart
beside itself. make it inane to thunder
'neath my skin
with your words, soft as dandelions
and you; sweet as pie.
still you murder, so soundless
i weep in its grace:
recoil at the thought of tomorrow
-you are the one thing that is truth
yet i don't believe
rest assured, love
we can't be near to one another
lacking reasons
so hard to...walk on the moon
its a moment passed sunrise
juxtaposed to after midnight
a time when my fingers had never felt so weak
Author notes
the title is a little joke between the two of us
idk, something about crescent moons and dolphins that we both found hilarious
and i love him, but its complicated =[
relationships can't exist on nothing
no love, no foundation, no gravity
this is for me
Comments
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very good
hi Dani, your work has really matured since I was last on the sight. Glad to see you have kept up the good work.
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WOw, young lady you are DEEP! That is all I can say. I love it!
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Hmm
I really like this one Dani, and yet I dont fully understand it. I like the way you wrote it, I love the style as well as the words you used. It's just the meaning and direction that escape me. In a way though, that makes it even better, kinda adds the whole mystery thing to it. Anyway, it IS a damn good poem.
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Jeb
thank you for your words. I have to admit, it is a pretty confusing poem. but for the most part, i was trying to express that the relationship is flimsy. we both have trust issues and it effects our love, barely giving it a leg to stand on. my friends have told me to leave, and find a better guy but when i'm looking, i find no one better than him. Its like a fairytale almost, but i dont believe in that sort of thing =]
thanks again
-Dani
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