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Brick for a Kingdom

 

 

 

      I got a piece

  of my own design;

        how can it fit

 in with the Cornerstone?

 

 

(the only questions

 we ask

 that matter

 clairify purpose...)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

side note- I wish AP still had the side border, the brick wall... my older poems still have that one. I miss my walls.

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  • Cat gold member
    July 28, 2008
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    i like the intent of this piece very much-
    sort of blows
    "there are no stupid questions" out of the water-
    there are stupid questions
    aren't there?

    a couple things i would do differently

    have instead of got
    and eliminate in
    as in:

    how can it fit with the cornerstone?

    nice, short, concise piece of poetry-

    great to find this.

    Mary