Life is changing
Hope I lived it right
Truth is hard to find
Trust me, there's something else
Faith is shaken like it's never been before
Pride is gone, never to return
Love is a game
Lust, a thing of the past
Pain fills my every move
Hate can't solve the problem it began
Lies are all I speak
Guilt crowds my brain
Laugh like it's a game
Crying for so much more
Live with my regrets
Die alone
Author notes
LetTheRecordPlay. "Cut out my eyes so I can't see this cruel world hates me". 2 O. Movin' On by Good Charlotte. First word of each line is lyrics from Movin' On. "Life hope truth trust faith pride love lust pain hate lies guilt laugh cry live die". All lines are lyrics from other Good Charlotte songs except Truth, Pride, Lust, Pain, Lies, and Guilt.
A contest entry
- What do you think? {options} by RawrSmileBabyPlz.
300 points, ended July 23, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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OMGosh!!1 THIS WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO horrible. XD I'm joking. As always...or am I???
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Ok ok it was good really it was. A great job. Wonderful. Exquisite...But Amazing most of all. Anything you write is instant shooting star on it's fleeting path to utter destruction when it collides with something hard..
But while in flight it's beautiful... lol Omy i'm sorry. NO your poem is not that. Hahah your poem flies on wings in which it glides to safety on the surface of the deep blue waters. In which it gets eaten by sharks...lol ok there is no changing it. It's all going down. hahah...ok I stop now.
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Hehe, obsessive much matage? This is freaking amazing though. Looks like you have quite a few new works, I'll have to read them. =) Great job and good luck.
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not obsessive. it's called copy all lyrics, paste into word document, and use the ctrl+f (find thingy) to find life hope truth trust faith pride love lust pain hate lies guilt laugh cry live die. Easy. Not very good, but easy.
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Dang this is really good. You must be a fellow Good charlotte fan. I liked this alot. Its very well written and i loved how you used the words in it :]
Thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck.
..<3..
Shelly
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