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Goodbye Gorgeous (Rondelet)

Goodbye gorgeuos
The time has come for me to go
Goodbye gorgeous
Please do not cry, nor fret, nor fuss
I will be back some day you know
And once again romance will flow
Goodbye gorgeous.

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    July 25, 2008

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    Goodbye is the hardest word to utter and to explain, I never liked goodbye, unless it was to someone I really disliked. But even they grow on you after a while.


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    July 23, 2008
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    Another Billbard feature poem with both romance and humor in a few lines! Good luck in the contest!