Times wasting and i dont think
that I have the patience to wait
for you to come your senses.
What feelings I have for you can
slowly fade away. As strong as
they are they can still fade.
I dont want you to wait till you're
ready and i've moved on. But that's
just it. That's what its coming down
to.
How are you gonna handle it when the
love I had for you is in the hands
of someone else?
Author notes
so recently i told my secret...the biggest secret i own. to my best friends and my bestest friend[idc if bestest isnt a word] and he's in like total shock and tongue tied. so everytime we talk its never fun...and it's always bland they aren't the same. i wrote this 2 page letter explaining that if i could take it back i would. And when i told him that it was a big mistake telling him. he was like i dont think it is. But it's so frustrating wondering wtf man are we ever or never gonna discuss. i'm sorry but you can't be at a loss for words for forever can you?
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i'm in a funky state right now....
Comments
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Nothing should ever go unsaid, even when it seems to bite you in the ass at the time...secrets held like that never give you the change...time heals and settles things...
A very emotional and truthful write...
wishing you all the best with it.
mystic -
Oh, yes, I understand this so much.
My sister and I recently went through
this, and is still going through it.
It's a restless circle that comes
back around to tear you down. >>>
lines from my soon-to-be-new-poem<<<
Somehow, you have to move on, and if
they can't accept it, then they
just can't.
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Oh sweetie I know exactly how you're feeling. I've been there. Basically you can do one of two things I've found. You can tell him you need to talk about it or it's going to go nowhere and be awkard, or you can let him know, and yourself, that you're not going to do anything about it because you don't want to change things. Personally, I chose the first and it worked out for me. I really hope that you and him have the talk you need. Trust me it'll be worth knowing in the end. Let him know that too. And if he says he doesn't really want to talk about anything, you'll just have to give him the ultimatum of having or losing what there could be. (guys dont like ultimatums, it bugs them that they can't finish things). I hope it works out!!!
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First off on the second line you left out the word "have"after I and yes some people can keep you guessing you should be able to share your feeligns with a friend confide in them and they should be there if they are a true friend much love always best wishes
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