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Sexuall Pssion

I am kissing you wondering
should i invite you in for "coffee"
your tong coxes me to surrender
and in the heat of the kiss
I find myself on the floor inside my door

I don'a remember inviting you in
but I know I want you inside me
to feel you hard and strong
I want you to take me to the stars.

you quickly undress us both and then you toy with me
you caress my belly you kiss my breasts.
all the sudden I feel invaded
as you slide two fingers in me.

I arch to meet you urging you to slide deeper,faster
you lick me everywhere: my belly, my neck and legs
finally you take me into your mouth
I think I'm going to burst

and when I think I can't take it anymore
your on-top of me and you bury yourself deep.
I groan and little mews come out of my throat
as you plunge deeper, harder,faster.

I soon climax and feel it
what I've wanted from you all night
the orgasm takes us over and you fall on me
too spent to even move.
I roll you over and lay beside you

thinking
 I can't wait to make love again.

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I've never written anything like this before. Does it look like an amature wrote it?

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  • Angelflower
    July 24, 2008
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    well this was a really good start that is for sure! lol.. The only thing that I would suggest is to use spell check before you post just a suggestion though! other then that you did a good job.. thank you very much for sharing! best of luck!!

    Angel