What does "Old" really mean
"Old" is a relative term used very loosely
"Old" to some means ancient
"Old" to me means mellow-vine ripe and time learned
"Old" is not a word that should be feared
"Old" is a word that should be revered and cherished
"Old" means that you've had time to learn right from wrong
"Old" means that you've gained experience in life's ways
"Old" means you've been able to build a family
"Old" means probability of gained respect
"Old" means a source from which others may draw
"Old" - My Friend - means a life of love
"Old" - My Friend - is a gift from above
Mr. Doug
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very well written
I love the way you think, as no one knows until the feel the erge to feel old lol
you said a lot in this piece, you keep the youth in your soul
my sweet friend!
Lin
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MoonsShadow
My thanks to your very kind comments on my poem "old"
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I appreciate your positive comments - thanks
Mr. Doug
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An intereasting piece, thoughtful and thoght-provoking, with some real wisdom.
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Mr. Doug
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