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Carnal amatory Pt. 2

Back turned I just keep walking up the stairs and let the skirt fall off my hips to the floor. Step out of the small mount of fabric and walk the flight of stairs. Just at the 2nd landing he was on me like a bull that sees only red. He slammed my little body into the wall, and hiked my legs up around his waist. Forceful, sweet demanding kisses. Tongue, lips, mouth all crashing together in wave after wave of brute force. He bites my jaw, and my eyes roll back in my head as he lets me slide back down his form. His thigh between my legs as neck and face are washed within his kisses. He takes my face in his hands, and softly kisses my lips. Grinding lightly in and up, warmth spreads throughout my limbs. If he loves me at all it was in that kiss that he expressed it. Breathless, filled with desire it's starting to take over. I push myself hard into him throw my head back to say, "you want to fuck me don't you? just put it in right here, take what you want" as I licked the side of his neck with the tip of my tongue. Some where deep within his throat he growls. I live to taunt him, "I know you want to fuck me babe, I am a dirty girl." He took me by the back of the neck, turned me and bent me over face into the stairs, all the while removing his hard cock from his pants and pulling panties aside. Grabbed my ass, placed his head at my heat and drove home. I cried out to the shock of being filled so forcefully. Then he was gone, and I gasp at the loss. Coming down on top of me reaching under my body to play with the swollen bud eager for attention. He whispers in my ear, heavy, and sensual, "Dirty girls get the bad girl treatment," *moan* "oh you like it when I tell you what a bad girl you are?" *Yes* as I play into his hand, back arched, legs spread wide. The weight is gone of his manly frame. "You forgot the wine." and he disappeared back down the stairs. I collect myself and preceded to my room. I lay myself down on red satin sheets, touching myself, aching for release. My thighs tighten, as I rub and flick my clit with gentle fingers. Wiggling under my own assault and no longer alone my eyes rise to meet the smoky glaze of his. Placing the glasses down on the night stand, he wastes no time in joining me. Removes his shirt, and settles to kiss and lick my inner thighs, legs, ankles, and feet. All the while I play with myself through white lace. My body throbs as he reaches the high inner thigh, squirming as I slip a finger past panties and find the wetness there inviting. He rips my hand from my pleasure zone, grabs the other to hold me firm as he teases me with his body, breath is hot on skin. But he does not touch me where I want it most, uncontrollably my body moves, and presses harder into him. He kisses my mouth with fervent movement. Tongue in my mouth, seeking out a strong dance within our mouths. He rips the shirt from my form, the action bounces my breast in my red and white bra. He cannot help but take a hand full, my eyes fly open wide as I grind deep with tilted hips. Small sounds start to form and I moan out loud. I do not know how much more I can take. But if I know him well enough that is just what he wants and is going for the dirty girl tonight.

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http://allpoetry.com/poem/4436607 part 1
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4449355 Part 3
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4466361# Part 4

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  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    February 13, 2009
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    Uh huh, uh huh....*sigh*


  • lilAj
    August 13, 2008
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    grrrrr! lol
    you're a bad bad girl miss Apple


  • BowelsOFloveANDhate
    July 23, 2008

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    Tease tease and more tease. The secret to a good time, expressed very well. So many to lack the concern or patience for this art youve mastered in word form. Well done!


    • Ho74pp1eP1e
      July 23, 2008

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      Thank you!

      It is all within the tease. It can be fun to have a quicky, but the pure pleasure comes from time, and working up to the moment of bliss. Most men are so worried about just getting off, big man you are. But a real man takes care of the woman first, maybe again, or again before themself. That is where it gets really GOOD. You should know read your work, you know what your doing


  • spideracer gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    You're hot ta trot

    I read part 1 again so I could follow your story fresh. It continues on perfectly, you most certainly have a way of expressing your lustful emotions, giving the reader an insight into your inner workings. Now onto part 3.


    • Ho74pp1eP1e
      July 23, 2008
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      Thank you so very much. It is fun to let people in to my sexual mind without anyone knowing who, or what I am. A lady in the streets and a freak in the sheets lol


  • A63-Angel
    July 22, 2008

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    need a towel or a shower??

    this was an amazing write!! you do indeed have a way with this kind of writing and i can't wait for the rest of it! and, yes, we are dirty girls behind our bedroom doors.


    • Ho74pp1eP1e
      July 22, 2008
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      Thank you, did you read part 1? it really works you into this one. Also like I told sensualbutterfly, if you like this you will love Just the Beginning 1 through 8


  • sensualbutterfly
    July 22, 2008

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    WOW!! More amazing than the first part!!! You have a way for this kind of writting!! I hope there will be another part?!


    • Ho74pp1eP1e
      July 22, 2008
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      Oh there will be....not sure yet how many parts but they will come soon. If you like this one I think you would really, really enjoy Just the beginning 1 through 8, I'll send you the first link. Thank you for the comment.


  • ShaShay
    July 22, 2008

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    We are all dirty girls if we let ourselves go there. Most of us just don't have the strength to let it be known. Great job here. Now I'm going to find Part 1. Pen on...


    • Ho74pp1eP1e
      July 22, 2008
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      LOL I totally agree with you on the dirty girls thing. I am strong and powerful within my charmes and not afraid to play. Thank you for the comment.


  • rollingzen
    July 22, 2008
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    clumsy


  • Cannonsfire
    July 22, 2008

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    Now I have to rummage to find Pt 1 and fast Love, C


  • Blueskywonder
    July 22, 2008

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    Ooh la la... *shakes consuming cloud from head*
    I wanna talk "NASTY".LOL

    A good story playing out a very erotic scenario... i guess the expression of your willingness and naughty is contagous.


    Frickin hell... i think i'll skip breakfast and look for a party

    Well done and thank-you for sharing (((NOT)))
    I'm only playing!
    Great write!


    • Ho74pp1eP1e
      July 22, 2008
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      You can talk NASTY to me lol, I wont mind. It is after all what I do best lol.
      Thank you so much, your comments mean the world to me.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    July 21, 2008
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    yeah ok..

    ..This is a masterful piece of writing, every detail
    feels like you're right there! whew! yeah..


  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    Fantastic stuff!

    You really do these short story chapters to perfection. I can't wait for parts 3 through 95!!!

    Great stuff

  • mcfreeman
    July 21, 2008
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    Part two for you

    Part three for me

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