i am so confused,
it runs deeply into my heart,
i have no idea,
on how to decide.
i love you dearly,
but already i feel,
like we are drifting,
and i don't know,
what i should do.
i don't know wether,
to decide to either,
stay with you and love you,
or do i break it off?
yu stole my heart,
and i swear you're,
my forever soulmate.
you would now think,
that there is my answer,
toall my confusion,
but you see it is not.
there is something else,
that i can't place,
and that one thing,
is what scares me the most.
Author notes
this is not just a contest entry i wrote this like 8 hours before i even seen the contest and just hadn't had the time to post it... but now it has become a contest entry
Umm yea wat do you think???
Comments
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This is deep and so much a part of you. I can feel the confusion and the sadness within this piece as it comes through very strongly indeed. You have written this well and it is made to the reader very clearly, that you are confused about this whole situation. Very well done for this. Keep writing and never be discouraged.
Yours in Darkness
Wayne Leon
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i feel this.
amazing emotive simplicity.
great write!
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Really good sis. Nicely expressed and reflected through the feelings of lost love and contemplation.
Love, your sis
~Emily~ xx
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this poem is sad. its very emotional and has this desperate tint to it. i really like the rythm in it. good job.
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