Currents control her closed-eyed seems
What once was real, it's own regime.
The seducing whisper in her ear
Licking, hissing, and slicing pure.
The cut that summons song birds, streams.
There, absent control of evil's dreams.
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
For a short piece, this has a lot of power and emotion. The feeling of being trapped is something most people feel at one time or another. You have expressed it well.
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I like this. I couldn't pinpoint exactly why, though. It's an extremely awesome
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