I want your feelings to be all mine,
I want you to lavish me with love,
I don't want anyone to shine
in your eyes but me, and only me.
The truth is..
I can see a future for us together,
though I am just jealous,
I am jealous of every woman that talks to you
I am just jealous
of everything and everyone around YOU!
by: Nada Adel Sobhi
In a list
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie Title Prompts by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended July 25, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I can relate, because I get very jealous as well, I just want him to want me & me and him to just be the only two people in the world, very well put.
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Outstanding
When you care about someone it is very easy to get jealous. I thought you expressed your thoughts and feelings very well in this poem which talks about love in all its intensity. Best of luck in the contest.
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