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~My Eyes Only See You~

 

 

The warmth of the sun shines upon our face

warming our souls each time we embrace,

and the love light I see in your eyes,

light up like stars in the heavenly skies.

 

 

We enjoy the warmth from the sun above,

as we bask in one another's poetic love.

 

 

The intensity between us starts to rise,

as we look deeply into each others eyes.

And our love will always be so warm and true,

with the sun's rays shinning on us from skies so blue.


 

 

 

 

© 2008 Angel's Whispers (All rights reserved)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Hello Dear Poet,

Thanking you in advance for reading my words,

and for any comments that you leave.

Your time and review is greatly valued,

and I appreciate your thoughts dearly, I also

hope that you have enjoyed the read.


Take care and many blessings to you.

Your friend in poetry.

~Angel~

 

 

 

 

Author notes

I choose number 5). Come let us blot out the sun by my eyes only seeing you.

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Comments

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  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    July 26

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    You did it again!
    Very beautiful and a wonderful read.
    Keep it up and thanks a lot for sharing
    it here!




    Jeremy0826
    • Jeremy0826


      Hello Jeremy,Blessings to you my dear sweet friend.Thank you so much for your wonderful comment on this poem.I am so happy that you were able to enjoy my words.I appreciate your thoughts so much,and value your time and reviews.
      Take care my friend,
      love and happiness I send to you and your loved ones.
      ~Angel-anne~

  • ckwriter69 silver member
    July 24

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    Beautiful Angel, this is so heartfelt. Thanks for sharing it and congrats on the HM. Keep them coming!!!!Lots of love,
    Charley

    • ckwriter69


      Hi Charley,so happy to hear from you sweet heart.Your thoughts are always treasured deep with this old heart of mine my dear friend.Thank you so much for the applause and for your thoughts, you truely are a real gem.Much love and happiness to you.
      ~Angel~

  • penman gold member
    July 22
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.

    • penman

      Hi there dear friend,
      Thank you so much for the H.M award.It was delightful writting for your contest.Thank you also for the applause and your kind comment left on my write.
      Blessings to you,
      ~Angel-anne~
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