my wounds are stitched with apology
our friendship mended with remorse
but how can I ignore the echoes of our past?
to which have set us on this course?
I smile when laughter and chatter surrounds us
but I know those loud sounds won't always be in the way.
It's a difficult task blocking out all that has come before us,
what all the strong echoes long to say...
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie Title Prompts by xxRainbowDawnxx.
300 points, ended July 25, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
unsurnity
Comments
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Very deep. Great job, and God Bless.
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expressive and very relatable, most definately.
like your choice of words, very intense and interesting! -
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Not bad, just needs a little cleaning up. Good luck in the contest.
-Livingemptyspaces
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