Friendship is a chain made stronger by time and quality of it spent together.
The chain feeds off the happy memories and the times spent laughing and giggling.
Now lets not forget the times of comforting, hugs and wise words.
This is what makes the chain strong, timeless and valuable.
And as the years go by, the friends grow old side by side, they learn each others rights and wrongs.
Then finally their times come for them to part
But then they never truly will, because they have a chain so strong.
That weird and wonderful chain called friendship
Author notes
This poem is dedicated and inspired by my 4 closest friends
A contest entry
- First. . . by SingPraiz4Hym.
525 points, ended July 28, 2008, 18 entries
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wonderful
you talk about true friends and so poetically done in free verse you say so much in one sentence because of your great vocabulary and adjectives and adverbs well done
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Beautiful
So true are your words and to true friendship is helping ones you love be free from others who try to harm friendship is being their strenfgth to live when they feel there is nothing left . Keep the chain together and have love for a lifetime
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How beautiful and what a lovely message. Excellent
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clever one! I have made my guess, and ill shoot myself if im wrong. read ur message. i wont put it on here!!
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Nice affirmative statements from the off you have here. Friendship is such a precious thing that needs treasuring and maintaining. Liked the metaphor. Cheers and thanks for sharing.
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I loved this friendship poem and yes how it does grow and deepend over the years if nurtured and worked at. I don't see though how it fits into 'first' but I did enjoy it. Good luck.
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It's good. The second-to-last line might have been better split into two lines, cos it's so long, but apart from that it was good
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