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I Don't Want To Be

I think that I'm a bit screwed up
I am the crack in your favourite cup
I think my head is a little broken
I talk but they don't know I've spoken
I am a fat tub of lard
I belong with the rubbish in the yard
I am the bad graffiti on the wall
Next to the deserted shop in the mall
I am the branch that snapped of the tree
I am the damp you cannot see
I don't know why I feel this way
I don't feel like it everyday
But when I look inside my soul
This is what fills a hole.

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  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    Oh my goodness honey

    Sometimes in life we have inner thoughts that tend to haunt us st times .No one knows exactly why but even myself has such thoughts. I have tried to understand it myself but found they tend to come when I am idol too long or sit and dig into my own mind searching for answers yet never find them. Those thoughts can be silenced for one must get active with others and find a hobby they love to do. I silenced mine many times by getting together with others and doing something fun and exciting.
    I heard in your writings you say you are a heavy person .Whats wrong with that it never stopped others from enjoying themselves so why should it stop you from living and enjoying life . People will talk it has always been that way since the beginning of time .But did you know that when people talk about others they are showing their own handycap for they want to be heard and feel like they have control and others to laugh with them .Its a terrible handicap we all see .The others out there arent looking down on you but knowing those so hateful being rude and uncaring. You dont pay them any mind and just go and do what makes you happy . Dont look around for those who are rude look to those who are with you and there to see your happy.
    You say no one hears you then speak up get out there in front and make yourself heard and they will not be able to hear you then .Dont ever sit back and let others direct your path in life .You are a very good poet have you worked to get yourself a book published if not why not . If you need help message me and I will get you on your way .If you are too young then find someone who cares for you and will put it in their name and you as the cosigner and author . Come on now stop thinking too much and lets get to doing .For the ones who digs too deep in their minds often doesnt like what they find .We dont know why we think what we do but if you stay busy those thoughts have no room to play anymore.