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Soft whispers fell
upon my confusion,
giving strength
and understanding


       ~to calm a wild spirit.

 

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  • HOODWINKED !

    Wow! Such a potent influence from Spirit guides that go vastly unnoticed by most except those who are spiritually tuned to their touch and whispers. Very nice thoughtful poem, thanks for sharing.

    You have been Hoodwinked today by the Poetic Bandits because WE CARE!

    Dennis


  • Lady Michaella
    January 15

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    oo
    this is beautiful. a whole image is painted by your words. another amazing write.
    x


  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 25, 2008
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    If you are aware

    You will hear his whispers so often shared great write here


  • Desire gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    Thank You!!

    Thank You for Your entry: Guides
    This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I do several times~ Images come to me in many forms~ Love the words: Soft whispers fell upon my confusion- and to calm a wild spirit~
    I'm being shown an animal lapping water from a stream-
    also being shown what appears to be a letter removed from an envelope- getting words: sobs- tears Whether metaphor or symbolism Also after reading again I was seeing what appears to be cupcakes- on a platter- they appear like a canary color type of icing-
    also reference to number five- wild it seems like a celebration-
    Hopefully that makes some sense...
    Excellent take on the prompt in 15 words~
    Powerful images & message You have brought forth

    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
    Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    **Judging will be done shortly...
    Many blessings too
    and much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • stavykm gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    Oh I Loved This

    I loved this write. So perfect with those 15 words. The pic you chose is perfect as well. Gee this is one of the best short writes I've read.

    ~to calm a wild spirit.

    So the beauty that lies within. Thank you for sharing with me.
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie


  • Grey Mouser
    July 22, 2008

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    They find their way into the fog, lending their will to bolster the weak and brace the tempests to share an ease of soul. Wonderful write love, best to you.

    Love,
    Mouser
    xoxoxox
    Sun and stars shine no brighter than you!

  • acalmingvoice
    July 22, 2008

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    NICE JOB

    Coming from a wild spirt, I'll remember to speck softly.....Great job,..as always, I like the part about soft whispers & confusion... Good luck in the contest,.....I'm sure you will do well,....Best of my love,....me.


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    Love that title! And the softness yet strength in the write! Excellent sis!



  • maralisa silver member
    July 22, 2008

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    giving strength and understanding to calm a wild spirit.
    wow so powerfully beautiful loved every word good luck in the contest


  • babygirl2582 silver member
    July 21, 2008
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    I'm almost sure you'll win this as always great write

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