Weeks of dreaming of her big night
belle of the ball
Perfect dress and hair
makeup just right
Dancing with the perfect guy
kissing in the moonlight
Finally giving herself
completely to him
To wake up feeling like trash
discarded in an alley.
Author notes
A contest entry
- +::[PIF Semi Quickie]::+ by x-Black-Butterfly-x.
300 points, ended July 26, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I think this must happen many many times!
I used that picture in a contest recently.. amazing the takes on it.
Yours is sad, yet poignant!
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Such a sad piece, very powerful statement that I'm sure some will relate to. The age old tale of to much drink and regret. Goes really well with the picture, good luck
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this was so sad!!! I really loved it though! in a way I feel like I can relate to it!!! 
you did a wonderful job brother.. I really enjoyed it!! best of luck!!
Angel
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Thank you
Thank you sis, this picture seemed to speak to me about what happened
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oowwieieee.what a sad tale...great write daddy and good luck *hugs*
stephanie ♥
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Thank you
Thank you sweetie. Remember dont trust boys
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haha i'll try
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So is the tail of a one night stand...from kissing in the moonlight to discarded in an ally...so much emotions flowing and they have matched your picture very well good luck my pet in the contest
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Thank you
This picture just spoke to me of happiness and then sudden sorrow.
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hmmm, good luck in the contest and take care daddy *hugs*
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not sure of this write but its done
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