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Titleless at the moment

Cowering down in fear,
Hiding behind your walls,
Fearing what might happen.

What they'll see,
What they'll think,
And what they'll say.

You never said a thing before this,
Just sat there waiting for the day to come.
Now you regret the choice.

People are figuring it all out now.
Some are happy to finally know it,
Others disapointed in you.

You have come out from your hiding spot,
Only to climb back in.

Maybe you should've come out earlier,
When times were better than this.
But you said it too late.
In the wrong time.
In the wrong place...

Can you help me with firguring out a title?

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  • justlikelivin
    September 19, 2008
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    Try Something Like An Animal Or Something (like cowaring dog or something)

    I LIKE IT, IT COULD USE SOME WORK, BUT OTHER WISE I THOUGHT THAT IT WAS PRETTY GOOD.