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Summer's Eulogy




like autumn leaves
            floating
            falling

her smile
crumbled
into tears





In a list

A contest entry

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  • SuicidalLover
    July 21, 2008

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    Ooooooo. What an amazing poem you have here. So vivid in detail and in only 10 words. Wonderful. Best of luck!
    ~Kystal Angel

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    Oh I did like this very much thank you for taking the time to enter my contest best wishes and much luck have a great day be well


  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    this is lovely, i really enjoyed where you took the prompt, lovely job and good luck
    stephanie ♥