Dear Sweet Heart:
Baby I understand, I promise I do,
I know I wasn't women enough for you.
Can't imagine what you've been through,
this is the end my last I love you.
These last few months we've grown apart,
I wasn't good enough to be in your heart.
So this is the end in which I soon depart,
and I hope you have the chance to restart.
It's very heartbreaking to you I know,
wish that I really didn't have to go.
But I never glowed like you used to glow,
this should be put behind us, it was long ago.
So sweetie this is my last and final goodbye,
I know you never really wanted me to die.
So sing once more, my one and only lullaby,
be very good and please baby don't cry.
Just remember what we had was so real,
and you helped me be able to finally feel.
It's okay, I know I was not your only appeal,
Have some Jack Daniels so your heart can heal.
Goodnight and goobye my sweet,
I love you so very much.
Ill see you in another life..
Your one and only,
Rose
Author notes
Velvet Rose Petals
A contest entry
- Suicide Note by newnoakua.
700 points, ended August 6, 2008, 39 entries
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Comments
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Wow, simply beautiful! Magnificent even!
Great work!

