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~Emotional Release~

Fragmented splinters dissipate
into shattered emotional distress,
releasing painful shards.

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Prompt: brittle
10 words

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  • SuicidalLover
    July 21, 2008

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    Lovely, just lovely.
    I wish you luck!
    ~Kystal Angel

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    This is a very sad take on the prompt but it is close to how alot feel lately thank you for your entry into my contest best wishes


  • lowercase prelude gold member
    July 21, 2008
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    dark and emotional
    and you've combined them both well. excellent write.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    oowwwie, lovely descriptions that are very painful.
    great write and good luck
    take care, stephanie ♥