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Dream Of Lotus

Mirror pond
of a clouded sky
she has no tears
just a quiet dream

Lotus flower floating
of morning
she has gone
leaving only memories

Mirror pond
into reflection
of what she's done
her silent song

She'll smile
to the rain
leaving circles round
she has gone


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  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 24, 2008

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    Excellent take on your picture, you've portrayed the emotions well. Good imagery to. All the best in the contest with it