Fire spit from the fire pit, spreading flames over your corny outfits,
You lames are ousted,
I知 making damaged goods of you real quick,
Those thoughts were counter productive, you're going to need a sedative,
It痴 all-relative what this poetic felon did
Watch as I seduce the paper, massaged with vapors, I致e inked out my nature,
I知 choice, a poetic quarter back with 21 flavors,
A robin hood who robs the good,
A clepto who robs real good
I知 stuck with insanity thoughts; all humanity is caught
All humanity is sought, after this toss; your remains are lost,
I知 drained with a cranium full of hot sauce, dancing like Barischnicoff,
I知 off, senseless, marbles sporadically spreading across
These are legitimate lyrics that's equipped from a fortified derelict
I kicks like Jet Li, I知 Fearless prick, don't test me, I知 sick,
Plus I知 medicated for you zits
I speak in metaphors while talking bullish like I知 a matador,
I suppose this makes them chickens packaged broads,
Keep gambling with me so I can make them dime bracket boards
Chime in for practice ya'll, the wines in the savage like never before,
Eating swine and cabbage, that's not what I知 here for,
However I will dine with Swine, as she痴 lavished by my awe
I知 tossing signs and tablets, building minds in the ravished,
Land mines under the carriage, ("no women, no kids")
Death of a poetic soul came with this marriage
His glow changed once every week on average,
His flows became much more slow, once the snow rained down his cheeks
The crows blamed her for the stoves heat,
The tabernacle was stoned twice a week,
Rock, paper and scissors over came the bones in his meat
The general's fleet took notice, the criminals crooks stood in focus,
This is a minimal look at the themes opus
Settling down like the queen lotus, a hook shot like Kareem's hocus pocus,
Serene scenes in the midst of the hopeless,
The fiends gather for this killer dopeness
Ben Stiller holding the soap dish, I been standing still approaching this
Bending while on the hill, you voted for this
Cramped joints, but cramming still,
This drug will leave you choking from it like a bottle of horse pills
Divorce this flow..nah', never I will
I'm too moist for water, the style is just too ill!
Author notes
AreSun joins the bashing down of 'the THINKER's Word Warz'
"I'm just letting off a little steam I had bottled up! Hey, if the "war" is on, i'm coming out swinging!" (AreSun)
Another add to the book of 'The THINKER's Word Warz'. If you haven't read it yet, please pick up a copy! Brouse these contributing writers pages to view this 'War' brewing: WiseWithWordz, AsIThink, Swangrnv, and moluv10. Enjoy, come again anytime! (WWWDZ 7/21/08)
open your mind to a poet's thoughts
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"AreSun might even be a contender to the throne...'cause that lame cat, THINKER sure ain't thinking up anything worth reading...lol"
Definately,
80-HD...
(WWW, this is hardcore all the way. Some gritty-elbow balling...lol. Son, this is scorching...loved the flowz, the blowz and who knowz? --- 'AsIThink').
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You definitely know how to manipulate and twist your words in ways that I could never think of. I love the flow of this and I'm glad to be reading your work again. This was brilliant
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wow...that says a lot coming from such a fantastic writer. i hope to have you on my team shortly...well at least team up with me in a piece or two! again, welcome back my friend!
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Hott!! Some great lines here bro! Keep it up!!
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Thanks allmighty captin. mucho gracis...tons of tanks.
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aaahhh damn!!
now aresun wanna blast?!!? how in the hell?... this is straight raw like sushi you see what i see aint hitting me(thak gawd! l.o.l.) guess those thinker opponents betta flee gee! l.o.l. (swangrnv)
psst hey fool!! bag back! i'm running rough in this town, u look like u needing a verbal beatdown!! ...Verbal Assassin.
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kind sir, your too kind! thanks for reading and enjoying the show! come again! lol
[The Verbal Assassin wanna test this fire, i suppose he's not aware of my flame throughing ability! i'm now obligated to finish him off!]-->AreSun..."never scared!"
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