The words seep in like acid rain,
Boring holes straight through my brain.
Confidence, I never had.
My own existence drives me mad.
They say I'm not fat,
They'd never tell lies.
So why do I still have
These tears in my eyes?
A contest entry
- Poetry, Poetry and PreWrites! by Lost Vampyre Angel.
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Comments
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We all started lacking confidence.
It's just a matter of time
and gaining experiences in life.
Meeting new people, making friends
and that's where conversation begins.
Simple, beautiful piece.
Summer51
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Ahhh, I really liked this piece! It's short, yet holds all the meaning in the world, and holds such a genuine feeling to it. Wonderfully penned. Thanks for entering & I wish you the best of luck with everything ! ♥
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This is beautiful.
WOW, this is an amazing poem! I applaud you!
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Good luck.
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