Fiery passion blooms in her lips
like red full moon shining within her eyes
sweet fragrance blending within his wanton breeze
tempting branches of passions, caressing every senses
evoking wet scents of promises so grand and sweet
Petaled lips he lingually teased
passionate moans for every dandelion kisses
ardent waltz of tongue unfolded pregnant sensations
breathing newborn wild rush of colors
humming butterfly, leisurely bathing in her scented petals
while she glint like a drop of dew in the morning sun
Methaporically written
A contest entry
- QUICKIE 8/10/30 (17 or older) by Blooming Poet.
300 points, ended July 21, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Now You Make Me Blush, Won gold in comp from Penman and am passing it on, winner please PIF 300 points by Topaze.
450 points, ended August 12, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sensually Inspired. by Poetryintheblood.
525 points, ended August 10, 2008, 19 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gimme some luv by unavailable.
600 points, ended September 18, 2008, 51 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is very nice!
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A very fine piece indeed, very well written. Thank you for your wonderful entry in this contest.
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Thank you for your sensually beautiful submittal, good luck in my contest, Josie
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congratulations on the gold
very beautiful poem Very sensual!
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I love this. metaphorically written really works well here. Great imagery and flow. great use of a line limit also
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Very sensual with beautiful metaphor...soft flow of passion with style and taste...excellent work...
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I like it. I like it alot. Wowowowowowowowowow. It's a likable poem. Which I do sincerely do. Quite sensual...my virgin eyes have been corrupted...but I like. And wowowowowow. And Hi. And Wow. And bye.
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