Oh God
you are the incessant reality
must be the devotee of the everlasting hymn
and immemorial melodies
so where to locate it
and where to apprehend it to submit you
the symphony of universe?
I know, the violin and the keyboards
and the articulations of the lips may not engross you
I ,therefore, refer the music of the twinkles
and the song of the benevolence of the coach
educating me the computer
she tutored me how to grin and how to win ?
Oh God...
Author notes
Prompt
And if you want, here's a song for you to listen to while you write:
Sylvia Plath by Ryan Adams
There are many occasions when you are convinced about the depth of subject and begin to move with the beauty of life, especially when you are impressed with some kinds of eternal qualities of a human being. I refer this note to Mrs Radha Chary who is a computer teacher and teaching us the computer, now these days..And she is incredible while treating us as her students and yes her smile and generosity is amazing..She wanted me to write a review of her performance as teacher of the class in a poetic form..And that is it...My regards to the teacher. Thank you Mam...
A contest entry
- Be Inspired. by Viva La Vie Boheme.
600 points, ended July 22, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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It is quite overwhelming to comprehend the author of all musical gifts and instruments giving ear to our thoughts sometimes about our music I would think...You seem to bring out this incomprehensible feeling in this write...and it is very well scribed here!
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As always with your work, this is very beautiful and profound. This is amazing, the emotion is very deep and true.
Well penned.
~lost
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Such a beautiful dedication! I love where you took it, and I sincerely hope that you showed it to her.
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This is a wonderful tribute to your teacher. I loved your use of metaphors of music for her.
my favorite lines:
I ,therefore, refer the music of the twinkles
and the song of the benevolence of the coach
educating me the computer
she tutored me how to grin and how to win ?
Oh God...
oh i loved the song you have up!
~Lisa~
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This is truly an inspirational write about how your emotion took hold of your soul; There's nothing more better then a wonderful Teacher. You never forget her....excellent write....novy
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Beautifully penned. I also enjoy the prayer-like quality this possesses. Your appreciation for your teacher is clear through your words. Wonderful job!
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I like the way this is written, prayer-like. Nice job
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Really cool to give this to your teacher. Great write.
Tal.
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