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touching

smooth to searching soothing hands
chilling sensations always linger

boldly ambient melting colors
a bursting melange of earth and shapes

pottery can rest on a green wooden bench
feelings forever held inside

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prompt: pottery

32 words

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  • Rmh4933
    November 8, 2008
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    Amazing

    such a mind blowing work about this subject, fine job

  • Rowan gold member
    July 28, 2008
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    great imagery. Liked this.


  • Cat
    July 26, 2008

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    pottery just makes us feel this way.. doesn't it?

    thank you so much for lending your unique perspective- nicely done and a pleasure to find here

    m


  • apropos
    July 22, 2008
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    beautiful words woven into a beautiful poem. bravo!