Carry me to petals
dancing upon sleek satin
Lay me down
…your kiss lingering,
electrifying my need to
taste you;
inhale your soul
and let it tango
with mine…
Author notes
This is a taster....for what is too come..if I get through to the second part of contest....and get to work with a partner ..then this shall grow into so much more
In a list
A contest entry
- erotic/sensual contest (adults only) by solitarytear.
600 points, ended August 3, 2008, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow. This was so beautiful. Carry me to petals
dancing upon sleek satin..amazing!
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aww thanx, its one of my favs..and its being built into a bigger poem at the moment, so i hope you like whats to come aswell
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So sensual!!! You always have that certain "touch" with these writes Hun!!! I love it and am looking forward to the next part!!!
Love you and missed you!
Aunty Az
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Thanks Aunty Az, now im back online, I look forward to writing it
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Best kind of tango in my opinion!
Beautifully sensual and soft sis!
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This is beautiful! I can't wait for part 2!
xoxo
KJ
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Lovely
This is just beautiful. I love this part
inhale your soul
and let it tango
with mine....
Gee Cin you just amaze me my precious niece. I wish I could write like this. Oh and your page is just beautiful.
Wishing you many blessings for you and your growing little family
Your Aunty
Kelle
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I know you have this style of writing hiding in you my Aunty and it shall share itself with the world one day
Thnk you for your lovely thoughts
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Bravo sissy! you did a wonderful job!!! I'm sure you will make it to the second round with this write!!! best of luck to you!
Angel
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awww go the confidence boost, thanx SiSsy
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What the eff? I have GOT to put on my erotic filter on.
Anyways.
"sleek satin"
Sounds like really comfy bedsheets. You know what's the best thing? COLD PILLOWS--especially in the summer!!
"electrifying my need to taste you"
Damn. 'electrifying' is one helluva cool word. Although..it's do dirty in your meaning.
"let it tango with mine..."
THAT'S BRILLIANT--using 'tango' to imply 2 people, which would imply...
well, you know.
Good luck, naughty poet
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hahaha..yep well I do write erotica
sleek satin...is comfy bedsheets lol...and oh cold pillows in summer..i like the sound of that ehehe
lov the word electrifying...it can give intensity where needed
aheheh i couldnt not use tango lol, so thanks darl
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MMMM
OK, it's like nine am, I pop on my ole computer, and wham, this is starin me in the face, and all before my first cup of coffee! I'm going to have to type fast, for if my hubby sees this, he will FOR SURE miss work today!!!!!! lol What a smokin thang ya got penned here! In your authors notes, you called this a taster, welllll, never mind, I've embarrased myself.lol Much luck in the contest you sexy thang. Your photo almost burned up my computer!!!!! Great piece! oop, pardon the pun! Love your shoe mood today!!
POETDONTKNOWIT
WRITING IT HER OWN WAY
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oh dear i caught first thing..lol
well i am glad it was me giving ya a wake up call
ahh yes this is only a taster...if i make it through this poem shall be a lot more lol
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WOW...
This is beautiful and tasty....
I can't wait to read the next round about what you will do together with your partner...
XXJeannette
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I do beautiful and tasty well..well in my opinion hehehe, thank you so much, your words are appreciated
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... inhale your sould and let it tango... *sigh
ok.. I do love to tango! Great!!!! Juls
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heheh yes tango is fun and sexy
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sissy sissy, so naughty
wonderful write, it was plesant to read, good luck and take care, stephanie ♥
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heheh not naughty...LOVING
heheheheheheh
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well then i better tell a certain someone to be "loving" with me
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ohh yes so u should
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you are silly sissy
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wow what a dance...
Love it Cinds...
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I shall be calling on you lover...to partner with me to complete the write...if I make a place in the judging...
she plans a second contest of pairs...my choice
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With you all the way my Lover....
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