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Souls entwined.

Carry me to petals
dancing upon sleek satin

Lay me down
…your kiss lingering,
electrifying my need to
taste you;

          inhale your soul
          and let it tango
                         
                            with mine…

Author notes

This is a taster....for what is too come..if I get through to the second part of contest....and get to work with a partner ..then this shall grow into so much more

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  • Alyzeh
    September 28
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    Wow. This was so beautiful. Carry me to petals
    dancing upon sleek satin..amazing!


    • CinfullyDelicious
      September 28
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      aww thanx, its one of my favs..and its being built into a bigger poem at the moment, so i hope you like whats to come aswell

  • azlyn gold member
    September 11

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    So sensual!!! You always have that certain "touch" with these writes Hun!!! I love it and am looking forward to the next part!!!

    Love you and missed you!

    Aunty Az


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 24

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    Best kind of tango in my opinion!

    Beautifully sensual and soft sis!


  • Jet City Woman
    July 23
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    This is beautiful! I can't wait for part 2!

    xoxo
    KJ


  • stavykm gold member
    July 22

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    Lovely

    This is just beautiful. I love this part

    inhale your soul
    and let it tango

    with mine....

    Gee Cin you just amaze me my precious niece. I wish I could write like this. Oh and your page is just beautiful.
    Wishing you many blessings for you and your growing little family

    Your Aunty
    Kelle


    • CinfullyDelicious
      July 23
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      I know you have this style of writing hiding in you my Aunty and it shall share itself with the world one day

      Thnk you for your lovely thoughts

  • Angelflower Greeters member
    July 22

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    Bravo sissy! you did a wonderful job!!! I'm sure you will make it to the second round with this write!!! best of luck to you!


    Angel

  • notorious silver member
    July 21

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    What the eff? I have GOT to put on my erotic filter on.

    Anyways.
    "sleek satin"
    Sounds like really comfy bedsheets. You know what's the best thing? COLD PILLOWS--especially in the summer!!

    "electrifying my need to taste you"
    Damn. 'electrifying' is one helluva cool word. Although..it's do dirty in your meaning.

    "let it tango with mine..."
    THAT'S BRILLIANT--using 'tango' to imply 2 people, which would imply...

    well, you know.

    Good luck, naughty poet


    • CinfullyDelicious
      July 21
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      hahaha..yep well I do write erotica

      sleek satin...is comfy bedsheets lol...and oh cold pillows in summer..i like the sound of that ehehe

      lov the word electrifying...it can give intensity where needed

      aheheh i couldnt not use tango lol, so thanks darl



  • Poetdontknowit
    July 21

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    MMMM

    OK, it's like nine am, I pop on my ole computer, and wham, this is starin me in the face, and all before my first cup of coffee! I'm going to have to type fast, for if my hubby sees this, he will FOR SURE miss work today!!!!!! lol What a smokin thang ya got penned here! In your authors notes, you called this a taster, welllll, never mind, I've embarrased myself.lol Much luck in the contest you sexy thang. Your photo almost burned up my computer!!!!! Great piece! oop, pardon the pun! Love your shoe mood today!!
    POETDONTKNOWIT
    WRITING IT HER OWN WAY


    • CinfullyDelicious
      July 21
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      oh dear i caught first thing..lol

      well i am glad it was me giving ya a wake up call

      ahh yes this is only a taster...if i make it through this poem shall be a lot more lol


  • Wolf Mistress silver member
    July 21

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    WOW...

    This is beautiful and tasty....

    I can't wait to read the next round about what you will do together with your partner...

    XXJeannette


    • CinfullyDelicious
      July 21

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      I do beautiful and tasty well..well in my opinion hehehe , thank you so much, your words are appreciated

  • fortyninereasons silver member
    July 21

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    ... inhale your sould and let it tango... *sigh
    ok.. I do love to tango! Great!!!! Juls


  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 21
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    sissy sissy, so naughty
    wonderful write, it was plesant to read, good luck and take care, stephanie ♥


  • unsigned gold member
    July 21
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    wow what a dance...

    Love it Cinds...

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