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Three short words

Three short words
Don’t say enough.

When no other time
Is better spent,
When I get high
Off just your scent,
Three short words
Don’t mean enough.

When nothing feels warm
Besides your touch,
When no one else’s words
Mean so much,
Three little words
Can’t say enough.

Even though I cannot say
How I feel
Without cliché,
Ill work to show you
Everyday,
From now until forever.

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  • FreeTara
    October 3, 2008
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    Very sweet and if his scent is your drug thats a majorly great guy you have there!!!


  • blood-for-ink
    July 28, 2008

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    you didn't put the quote that is required and thrid line to the last you put "ill" not "I'll", but other than that, you did very good work

  • Broken-Bones
    July 23, 2008

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    I liked this, the way it was simply and beautifully filled with love. I liked your ending a lot as we all know as poets that it is hard to express love in words without cliches but you remind the reader that actions can be so much more powerful. For me the strongest three stanzas are the first three. I loved the structure of the second and third and thought your use of rhyme was wonderful. You really captured the little things that add up to make love; the smell, the touch and the feelings. Great Write.


  • Walls-within
    July 21, 2008
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    Wow, I love this poem. The way you write it is amazing. Good luck in my contest.
    ~W.W~


  • introubleintx silver member
    July 21, 2008

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    As I read this, I can relate. Not just to the life is beautiful aspect, but the aspect that it gains it's beauty when sharing it with someone special! You have penned it well. Good luck in the contest!

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