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Inhaling and hoping.

 

 

This rose doesn’t give your scent,

Still, I smell it
hoping a dedication…

                               one moment of special,
                               memorable

                                                   …precious, for only me

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Just something that came out when my eyes discovered the picture

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  • Symphony
    September 9, 2008

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    Ohhhhh I like this; it seems very personal, and yet we could all imagine ourselves in that situation - eyes closed, sniffing, hoping for some scent, some lost memory, some secret message ... very nicely done indeed!


  • plainoljoe
    August 8, 2008

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    not many things prettier than the peppermint rose. Like your write it shows both live and vulnerabulity

    joe


  • stavykm gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    I love the Rose

    That is nice as if you gave yourself a gift, the beauty of a rose. We all should do things like that for ourselves and for you now expecially now that you are pregnant.
    Much Love
    Aunty Kelle


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    this is so beautifully written , the softness and life of your words speas so amazingly. well done sissy


  • Coffer
    July 21, 2008
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    You certainly do have a way with words, a beautiful peice that says it all.


  • KayJay
    July 21, 2008

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    A wonderful sharing of memory... tantilizing in it's mystery sure to drive everyone crazy...
    Ken


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      July 21, 2008
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      memory..not a memory..just thoughts that came when I saw the picture on another site lol


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    Yay for stuff just coming out!!!



    Aww.. it's so pretty sis.. and longing...

    You deserve lots of sweet smelling roses and special moments!


    • MaMa-2-be-Cindy
      July 21, 2008
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      yes yay heheh

      i thought that too..i had such longing to it lol

      yeah tell matt i deserve em...it's been a while since I got flowers lol

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