It's time to sleep
I've been relieved
My rifle at my side
My knife in it's sheath
Lord let me live another day
As I put myself in harms way
I made my choice, I took the oath
I stand for freedom, but I don't boast
My God, my country, my family
The things I hold so dear
With these all on my side
There's nothing for me to fear
But if I should fall before my next relief
I will stand before you Lord with honor and dignity
So, while I'm here please make me strong
To fight the battles and right what's wrong
God Bless America
Author notes
This was the last letter i got from my dad as he died in the Iraq war a couple of weeks back . He was so dedicated to his country that he would die for it . He left his wife and 3 children in this world and we will never forget him . To everyone in the war in Iraq and other places i salute you and say thank you for giving us the freedom to live another day . As my dad says " you fight for what you believe in "
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- Take My Breath Away(Anything you Want) by fairytalelovestory.
675 points, ended October 19, 2008, 106 entries
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But if I should fall before my next relief
I will stand before you Lord with honor and dignity"
awesome dedication. this is just wonderful to read and i took pride in reading it. I can feel the emotions in every word and can tell you meant what you wrote. such energy in this, im glad i came by
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Wow. this is beautiful. very well written.
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A beautiful, deifant and dignified tribute. Fantastic writing.
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I don't understand how this hasn't had any more replies than that quick one from the judge ; such a heartbreaking letter this must have been for you to receive from your Dad, and so soon before he died, my heart goes out to you and all yours for the loss you have endured
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Ty for entering and good luck
this one made me cry
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