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Undeserving

Soaked in perfection, you're a delicate beauty
Sadly I'm everything you're not and nothing you love

Your body is your canvas, you brushed it on gracefully
I'm a painting of a soul poisoned by hatred

Your surface is one never seen before
Mine's a print of a portrait already created

So mother superior, put yourself on display
I'll be the disgraceful piece behind the curtain

Author notes

Radiohead- Creep
I grow up with this song.

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 21, 2008
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    great take on the prompt, haha, i knwo what you mean, i grew up with this song and so many others, im sorta a music freek, but im bad with names and everything
    i really like what you did with your poem, thanks so much for entering, and take care *hugs*
    stephanie ♥