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Passions untamed. . .

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As he stares at her hypnotic eyes...
And admires the beauty of her smile
and her legs
Bared to her mid thigh...
He watches her body writhe and quiver...
As he slowly lowers his toward hers.
Wondering if she will resist...
She invites him to ignite her untamed passions...
And as he accepts her invitation
Their adventure of wild ectasy will soon begin...

dragonheart1

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  • Crazy Coconut gold member
    July 23
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    your imagery really is very good. Written in good taste, and left much to the imagination of the reader


  • Blooming Poet Greeters member
    July 21

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    a few rough patchs where you loose the flow kinda detract from the poem, but overall ann amazing poem. great work.

  • maralisa gold member
    July 21
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    She invites him to ignite her untamed passions...And as he accepts her invitation Their adventure of wild ectasy will soon begin...wonderful poem let the adventure of wild extasy begin I loved your desriptiveness within you words good luck in the contest


  • A63-Angel
    July 21
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    wow! very good. i like this one, too!