Frozen in place
but unfrozen in time,
Spring will come
and awaken you,
make you green and alive
once again.
Spring will come
and so will
energy and life!
by: Nada Adel Sobhi
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt 30 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended July 22, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I think of spring when i read this poem.
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Simple and to the point...lovely in imagery and flow...thank you for entering!
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Outstanding
I liked the simple message of this poem which is refreshing and delicate. The tone is light and refreshing and you bring the welcoming spring to life in front of our eyes. Best of luck in the contest.
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