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Jeff Green

To him the day’s a virgin sheet

Awaiting gentle rape of words,

The sighs, the lies, the kisses sweet,

The flight of birds.

 

A garden bench, a lovely lass,

A pot of tea, a tray of cakes,

The sun, the errant bees that pass,

Are all it takes.

 

This poet, touched by wistful wit

More than his own – a gift of grace

To one who has no sense of it –

Exact in place…

 

No god disturbs his simple soul

Or pains his heart; empirical

His mind, and yet his life’s a whole –

A miracle!

 

If you would read the blush of dawn,

the waxing light, the atmosphere

Suffused with love, the hush of morn –

Then linger here.

 

Each sonnet brings a kiss of peace,

Each ode a knowing innocence.

To him death’s touch is soft release

In somnolence;

 

But while he lives I’ll laugh with him,

I’ll marvel at his endless smiles;

The rhymer’s way, walked at a whim,

Has many miles!

 

 

Author notes

This poem is from my series “58 degrees North”, which were composed, or at least written down in embryonic note form, in the far North West of Scotland, during a week in July 2008. Some of them have gone forward as part of my portfolio entered in the Manchester Poetry Competition 2008. Several of them are written for or about AP poets.

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  • Tirrell
    February 11
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    A beautiful poem, I love the form. It has a soothing quality to it. Very nice!


  • Amera gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    Wow! I really am impressed with this. This poem is pure magic and a wonderful dedication to a wonderful poet. Now what are you going to do since you made him fall in love with you?

    Love,
    Amera♥


    • cricketjeff gold member
      July 24, 2008
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      I waiting to read the dedication to you


      • Mairi bheag gold member
        July 24, 2008

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        It'll get polished up and posted in due course. But please remember, these are not necessarily all poems "about" each poet; I conceived them as being largely "for" each poet.


        • cricketjeff gold member
          July 24, 2008
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          That's understood, and I want to see what you give to each, the three so far have been wonderful!!!


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      July 23, 2008
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      Absolutely nothing!

      tee hee hee.

      Again, I'm glad you like this one, Sis. Thank you.


  • Dalaney gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    I couldn't have said it better myself!
    What an honor it is to know him and to be his friend.
    Love, Lane


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    Mairi, first, I love it, you've captured him well. Good luck with the competition...we'll be rooting for you

    I loved the Sapphic Ode (Pope Style)

    Sue


  • toomysterious
    July 21, 2008
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    Such wonderful beauty in the rhythmic flow of this it carried me away.


  • PerVirtuous
    July 21, 2008

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    I like the way your phrases trim
    this English "Man of Mystery"
    and know you are the girl for him!
    Have bunnies three.

  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 21, 2008
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    Whoops missed the damn bunnies

    Great stuff again!

    Jeff


  • cricketjeff gold member
    July 21, 2008
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    To be honoured so beautifully, with so many personal and poetic references is beyond anything
    To have it done in a form I'll champion against all comers and adore by a poet I admire in such degree has my grin almost meeting at the back!
    Bravo Maestra Bravo
    And far beyond that,
    Thank-you to my sister teacher and friend
    oh and "Not Bad you utter utter Nana!!!!"

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