For not in all the world,
Was there an angel more complete,
Her darkness resounding from greyed-out wings,
Broken and obselete from her past,
She touched upon the lives of another angel,
Brought her back from crimson rivers deep,
Helped her to live and to become,
What she is today, broken her endless sleep,
The angel that resides upon this page,
Has touched the lives of many fallen angels,
Brought them back from emptiness and helped them fly,
So I dedicate this prose to her endless support,
To produce such art in prose and colours,
She deserves a special mention I think,
Helping others never herself, so now,
I offer you this poem, in return for nothing,
You're an angel and hold your feathered wings to mine,
We will embrace tomorrow and mend our hearts,
Fo as you see, this world is cruel, but when one life ends my dear, that's when another one starts,
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Interesting. The prose itself is quiet intriguing and thought provoking and it is easy to tell it is straight from the heart. Sorry I can't go into more depth, struggling with the cruel topic of further trigonometry. >.<'
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I Love it so much.. your words touched me very deeply. I feel extremely honored that you wrote this for me. I love it so much I posted it on my page.. come and see it. thank you so much for this.
kat
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this is amazing honey,
i love it, i know she does,
you dedicated this well to her,
and she deserves it lots,
all my love,
kitty xxx -
This is a sweet write for someone that you care about dedication poems always make me smile thank you for sharing much love
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