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Rain, Rain, Don't go Away.



Life-saving droplets falling from the sky
The complexion of their existence
A mystery to I

Helping you live, giving you water
But taking away lives, in floods
And Disaster

Seemingly confused of what to do
Travelling the world, never settling
Never anew.

They dampen down the Earth
In Spirit and in Existence,
During their birth

So simple, as we think of them most
A pain during our walks, but they
Are forever lost

Falling to their deaths? Or back
To their births, An endless cycle
Of a life so black

Ran away from, so so sad.
A rain droplets life, could drive
them so mad.



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  • rosie4491
    July 26, 2008

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    Aww I like this. Very cute. GREAT personification in this. Wonderful write. Best of luck in my contest.

    Keep it up =]