It all fades to darkness.
It just feels like it don't matter anymore for I feel the end is near.
Something inside me can't take it.
Trapped.
Alone, forever alone.
A seductive voice inside my head tells me to just end it.
End all this self induced anguish at the prospect.
There is no one beside me, nowhere to find peace.
The voice.
The voice inside my head is speaking.
It speaks of a life forever entrapped in constant bliss.
A life of no worries, a life of no pain.
Because of this loneliness inside me, I have given in.
The end I never believed to be so close, red dripping off the point of a knife.
Now as my eyes close for one last time.
I have found what I dreamed of.
Escaped from where I lost.
In death I have finally find a cure.
A cure for my loneliness.
A contest entry
- Suicide Note by newnoakua.
700 points, ended August 6, 2008, 39 entries
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Comments
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hmm... while this piece is emotional, moving... and really good (I'll read it again later I'm sure, I really enjoyed it) it wasn't what I wanted in the contest.
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Neat read, your words are filled with despair and longing. Superbly done, good luck
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