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True friendship

They talk about you
like your not there
You won't stop yelling
about not being here.
You wanna go?
Jump off a cliff
I'm bound to be there without a riff.
I write this poem
in the thought of you,
Now I hope ,
you know what to do.
Because no matter what,
I'm here for you.

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No matter how rough things get, someone who really cares for you will stand at your side through thick and thin. Regardless of what happens.

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  • TyrannyForestFairy
    July 21, 2008

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    Wonderful

    This is purely lovely. I love the fact that it has the factor of a will to save somebody if they were in trouble. It was heartfelt and it spoke to me, it was sweet. Great write, I enjoyed this.

    ~Emily~ xx


  • Angelflower
    July 21, 2008

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    this was a really touching and heartfelt poem.. There is so much strength here.. What a wonderful friend you are.. I hope they know how luckey they are to have you there for them.. Thanks for sharing this heartfelt piece.. Best of luck in the contest..

    Angel


  • sOuL
    July 21, 2008

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    i am just more than happy
    i have lost the words
    i am lost in this poem
    thank you for a great poem