have I told you lately
how your body crushes
into the curves
of my bones
hips, nicely spread
indenting you
a Lego set
interconnected
all the pieces fit
on top
underneath
or backwards
depending on your mood
the way your mouth tastes
on my tongue
so different on holidays
when salty sea tips the scales
issuing blue, saliva and foam
because you are wild,
free and with me
at home
with its warm wine
after dry days
the office suit
neatly pressed,
ink blots
a Rorshach test
on each breast
your hands paint
all the shapes
and dabbles in laughter,
shy giggles
until we're breathless,
formless- oneness
it isn't a word
but I enjoy how it feels
inside me
how you never leave me
even when sleep calls,
arm falls pinning my hair
I could tell you
if my mouth was ever empty
it's so full of you
it finds no time to speak
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Stunning. You have blown me away with this. Truly one of your very best. I adored it. Don't you love the words we make up for love...lol. I do it too.
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Lol Yes and who'd have though Lego could be so stimulating lol
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wow... i loved it!
"it isn't a word
but I enjoy how it feels
inside me"
That's probably my favorite part. It's so expressive and beautifully written. Awesome job with this.
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hahaha! wow steamy, wonderful and a dash of humor. All the things I love about you rolled into one terrific bit of poetry.
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Well Lego can be sexy depending on how you look at it 
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Hmmmm....lego??? NOW I understand why i've always loved lego...maybe it's a poetic thing, lolol as I can see you love "lego" too - perhaps rather "leg over" - hehehe. Lovely sensuality here, Chez - a big sigh from me, my friend!!
~ Nicolette
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lol I know it's an interesting metaphor but it came about watching a friend's child play with his set of them lol seems anything can make me think of him
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sissy
lol....i see that double date of ours might involve getting hotel rooms
wonderful write and keep it up
stephanie ♥
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We have a double date planned? o.0
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haha maybe
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lol Luna thinks so, but I don't think I am sharing you with anyone straight away
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hmmm, well you guys get to run off, when me and lorcan run off, so its all good
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somebody said crazy good
Damn right. Add my name to the crazy good list.
This piece is so tight and straight and true you could hang your laundry on it.
Tom
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lol Well i thank you for a most interesting compliment lol I had never thought of it quite like a taut line
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AHHHHHHHH! run!!! it's crazy good!!! lol..
You did great with this very expressive write.. ehem! lol.. wow.. it's a little heated and sensual and so many other things all rolled into one!! me likes! lol.. Bravo sissy!!! glad your in a good mood
Angel
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lol a very good mood Thanks sissy
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Wow! Err.. sexy much?
This is a gorgeous piece SIL holding love, sensuality, desire and all those good things.
A fabulous read.. and the ending! heh
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Thanks hun, just a moment in my day lol
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