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My Way (Very Explicit)

One night with you my woman is all I ever need
To show you how dirty human beings can truly be
Lick me everywhere you're tongue has never been
Shine light on places your eyes have never seen

There is no such thing as love tonight, just fuck
Allover the bedroom we will never be stuck
I might even play nice once if you have lady luck
Even if you say no I will force you to suck

Making you gag as you swallow my balls and dick
Biting down hard on your swollen red and worn clit
Mouth, pussy or ass; woman take your first pick
Gonna abuse every hole, gonna make sure all of me fits

The night will never be over, not until I say so
I'll cum in every hole and you will never say no
My tongue inside your pussy on the bed, lay low
I won't stop till you spew that clear-grey flow

Drink your cum out of a cup then spit it on your chest
Sticking a finger in your ass, putting it to the test
8 hours isn't enough I won't let you get any rest
Your body is mine tonight and sex is what I profess

I won't care if your pussy is soar, I'll go even more
Keep the door open let everyone hear you scream and roar
You're my private whore, tonight we got hardcore
Marks on your ass and back, I ravaged you; gored

Your pussy is spent, got no juices left inside
It's all in my body because my mouth opens wide
Whatever cum is exposed you know it's already dried
We fucked so hard wouldn't be shocked if we died

You were my slut and we fucked all night and day
Gonna do it again later with a deep and sexual display
This time it's your turn, I'll be your man-whore today
Your rules, your commands because I already had it my way

Author notes

Wow this all came to mind...one hot night in a hotel room. I was in a serious mood when I wrote this. Having someone please you and have their body to lust however you want with, only to have the roles reverse the very next time. Used this to also practice my rhyme...and it is simple, used an easy AAAA BBBB CCCC structure throughout.
Loved how it turned out...feedback greatly appreciated...hope this gets you all hot.

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  • TheToeSockMystery
    December 8, 2008

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    I really enjoyed this write, it rings true and strikes home with me because I am a switch when it comes to Sub/Dom roles..although I must admit I much better at being the submissive litte slave. If your into that sort of thing I have many submission based writes posted here on AP! Thank you for the post it was truely a wonderful sexy write.


  • ilikepurpleheads
    September 26, 2008
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    Wow ! good stuff come bye my page and read some of my juicy stuff !


  • hotchocolate gold member
    August 8, 2008

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    WOW!!!!!! I need a paper towel to wipe the sweat off me!!!!!!! I loved this


  • sensualbutterfly
    August 8, 2008

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    Good God man!!! That was awsome!!! Hot and erotic. Made my heart beat faster...everything I asked for and more!! Absolutely loved it. Thanks for entering

  • limechic
    July 21, 2008

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    wowww yeah nasty is right. very demanding!! yet...still hot. i loved it...made me blush a bit lol

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