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that night

Looking into your eyes
Looking straight into your heart
All I see is warmth
All I feel is love

You may not realise it
You may not see it
But you are perfect
But you’re all that and more

We have our past
We have good & bad memories
You are who you are because of it
You try to remember only good

My love for you has never wavered
My hearts still yours
You haven’t noticed
You don’t realise

I gave you a ring
I made you a promise
It meant a lot then & still does
It still has that promise

We spent time together
We talked for hours
We knew we shouldn’t have
We said a lot that needed to be said

That night meant a lot
That night still is important
I realised a lot then
I needed to hear everything you said

I still love you
Even though I know I shouldn’t

Author notes

this was written on the 23rd of june...i was kinda yeah....

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  • peregrin
    July 27, 2008
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    Hun, it is amazing... really well written.
    Talk to me anytime...


  • ELmo LuVZu 4eVA
    July 24, 2008
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    beautiful

    this is such a nice write ...kinda reminds me of stuff ... but yeah nice write hun love u xoxo


  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    July 21, 2008

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    I like the forbidden quality that this poem has...

    Sounds like regretful reflection.
    Painful but necessary.

    Hope you cool!


  • Ljmyers
    July 21, 2008
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    awesome

    this is gorgeous babe, an amazing write. well done.
    Love ya xx


  • LovesPlayToy
    July 21, 2008
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    this is beautifl!!

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