The sky's unfold
a Heavenly darkness erupts
Tragedy
on this fateful night
as you redeem worthiness
and confide in the Father
Shadows of anger
dwell within my heart
such a deed was done
without a second thought
I couldn't let you die
without saying goodbye
Clouds become shapes
above my broken soul
images of my faith
and how empty I've become
let yourself go
my Father
My spirit swells with regret
Wishing I had spent more time
paid more attention to you
loved you deeper
and now all I can confide in
is within the dark-side
of your flaming star...
Author notes
Written to the only person who really understood me... Bless you, Daddy....
A contest entry
- The Beautiful Dark by Spiritual Soul.
1300 points, ended July 22, 2008, 19 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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aww this is so sad, but I loved it all the same. This was an awesome dark write. Thanks for your entry and good luck!
Blessings,
~Michaela~
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