…Goodbye…
This pain is too hard
I just can’t take it
Over and over again
Everyday of my worthless life
I stop and think
Will it ever get better
I’m at my breaking point
I don’t know what to do
I pick up the blade
I stare in the mirror
I know this isn’t me
But it’s just too hard
So I put the blade too my wrist
I feel the skin break
I scream but nothing comes out
I’m feeling a little dizzy
I start to fall to the floor
I can’t seem to breathe
I reach for something
But nothing is there
I fall and I can’t get back up
This is when I now know
That everything is over
And now all there is to say is
…Goodbye…
-Xxamber1313xX
A contest entry
- Suicide Note by newnoakua.
700 points, ended August 6, 2008, 39 entries
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Comments
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wow, great work. Indeed goodbye... there's really nothing else that can be said.
"I fall and I can’t get back up
This is when I now know
That everything is over
And now all there is to say is
…Goodbye…"
probobly my favorite bit out of this piece!
Great work and best of luck in the contest!
...Goodbye...
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