Love’s been made into a social term,
Our haste destroys us like a bud with a worm,
Superficiality,
Mingles with reality,
Chorus:
Where is the justice in the world?
Even angels seem to falter,
Under the black rays of the new sun,
Earth has veered off course,
And (no ones going to stop her! – x2 )
Peace is just the way of saying,
Temporary rest,
For bastards in there business suits,
To buy love from there kids,
War is nothing but a get rich quick scheme,
That has quickly turned bad.
[chorus]
Nowadays truth is just,
A well concealed lie,
That takes away our wings,
So we are unable to fly,
Lies today seem to be,
What make great leaders great,
It seems to be it’s frowned upon,
To be honest with what you say!
[chorus]
If the world is a circus,
Than war is the ring leader,
Telling us what to do,
Killing and asking questions later,
The world is tearing at the seams,
And in turn it tears up dreams,
Of love and peace and truth,
What happened to humane virtues?
[chorus] x2
There’s nothing left to lose! x 3
Author notes
song i wrote. on emy personal favorites that i wrote.
A contest entry
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Comments
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A very deep lyrical rhyme here. Thank you.
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yes.
thank you thank you thank you for this.
the distortion of this nation is quickly becoming beyond recognition. i'm convinced there's little to no hope left.
i loveeee that it's a song, i'm mostly a songwriter myself. very nice work, friend.
best wishes and best of luck! -
Great i loved this alot. Its so very good. thanks for entering my contest i wish you the best of luck ..<3.. Shelly
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