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Love Grows

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When his eyes spoke
without words
emotions danced over me.
Gentle was his embrace
tenderly hands touched.


I heard robins sing spring's
promised melodies.
Love is real, God is love
His gift to us all.
Feelings growing within
two hearts you can't contain;
desires to see sunrise.


Trust enhances surrender
willing to give your soul;
you step into reality.
Knowing your heart
is speaking music
to his ears.

"I love you"

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Quote: "I love you"...is a universal phrase being said by the all living beings...Unknown

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  • PastelMoons gold member
    August 1, 2008

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    This could not be sweeter
    I am deeply moved.
    Great take on the quote!
    Great write!!
    Thank you for sharing
    your gift of words
    with us!
    ~Pastel


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 27, 2008

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    Melody of the love and beauty of the love are here to bring the music of love...well done..and my thanks for sharing such a wonderful write in my contest...


  • Wolf Mancini
    July 24, 2008

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    I declare this the winner

    Yeah I know I can't do that...
    My friend...this is beyond outstanding.
    So, sooo beautiful.
    You should give this to someone you love on their birthday.

    xo
    wolf


  • Sandygram silver member
    July 21, 2008

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    So Beautiful!!

    Hello, You have pened a lovely and tender opoem for the contest. So perfect with this delightful picture. Thank you for sharing and best of luck in the contest. My favorite lines are....

    Trust enhances surrender
    willing to give your soul;
    you step into reality.
    Knowing your heart
    is speaking music
    to his ears.

    Such lovely words. You take care.

    Bless You,
    Sandy